Narrative writing Frozen ocean.

Narrative writing 

Frozen ocean.

Introduction: what is going to happen, outline of story

Paragraphs x3: each paragraph should have a main point.

One is a cargo ship which has containers full of apples. These apples are for the apple factory. The apple factory supplies an isolated school in a jungle for their students. There is also a commercial fishing boat. The commercial fishing boat catches fish for the isolated school too. And lastly, the cruise ship brings in tourists who help bring in money to the isolated town. However, supplies were running awfully low so the three ships had to take another route and get supplies from another area, which was Antartica. 

On the way there they got stuck and one of the ships, the fishing boat hit a submerged iceberg. But luckily the other ships survived and tried to help them get free. The cargo ship was strong enough and pulled the fishing ship free. The people on the fishing boat felt joy and happiness until the cargo ship got stuck after getting pulled out of the submerged iceberg. The cargo ship is stuck in the ice. It's all up to the cruise and the commercial fishing boat to pull the cruise out of the ice  one to pull out first the cargo ship (strong) or the commercial fishing boat (fast). 

The commercial fishing boat tries to get back to the island for help however there a big frozen ice storm the sky is black the wind strong the heail heavy, the waves were huge, the fishing gear goes overboard and captain fears for the safety of his crew they travel all night the sun rises right in front of them their filled with joy they go find help for their friends they get help and for that rest of that fixing the fishing boat and getting supplies like food,a rescue equipment, first aid kit and warm cloths now they’re on their way to rescue their friends.

6 hours in to there they notice changes, it's getting colder, the boats going slower and slower and it's extremely foggy BOOM the ship starts to smash through ice the fog starts to go away they see their friend surrounded by a frozen ocean.