Narrative writing Frozen ocean.

Narrative writing 

Frozen ocean.

Introduction: what is going to happen, outline of story

Paragraphs x3: each paragraph should have a main point.

One is a cargo ship which has containers full of apples. These apples are for the apple factory. The apple factory supplies an isolated school in a jungle for their students. There is also a commercial fishing boat. The commercial fishing boat catches fish for the isolated school too. And lastly, the cruise ship brings in tourists who help bring in money to the isolated town. However, supplies were running awfully low so the three ships had to take another route and get supplies from another area, which was Antartica. 

On the way there they got stuck and one of the ships, the fishing boat hit a submerged iceberg. But luckily the other ships survived and tried to help them get free. The cargo ship was strong enough and pulled the fishing ship free. The people on the fishing boat felt joy and happiness until the cargo ship got stuck after getting pulled out of the submerged iceberg. The cargo ship is stuck in the ice. It's all up to the cruise and the commercial fishing boat to pull the cruise out of the ice  one to pull out first the cargo ship (strong) or the commercial fishing boat (fast). 

The commercial fishing boat tries to get back to the island for help however there a big frozen ice storm the sky is black the wind strong the heail heavy, the waves were huge, the fishing gear goes overboard and captain fears for the safety of his crew they travel all night the sun rises right in front of them their filled with joy they go find help for their friends they get help and for that rest of that fixing the fishing boat and getting supplies like food,a rescue equipment, first aid kit and warm cloths now they’re on their way to rescue their friends.

6 hours in to there they notice changes, it's getting colder, the boats going slower and slower and it's extremely foggy BOOM the ship starts to smash through ice the fog starts to go away they see their friend surrounded by a frozen ocean.    

THE FOREST OF DOOM!!!

THE FOREST OF DOOM!!!

When B.O.B arrived at the forest of doom they saw a wooden shack, they needed rest from a long day being on water. They scouted for danger in case there were traps that could kill them. They finished scouting the area, time to go inside being cautious for the traps inside they saw three beds. They woke up early in the morning to continue their journey. They stop for a quick snack break, they hadn't eaten since they were in the raft. When they finish eating they hear the leaves shaking like crazy, BOOM, BOOM, BOOM mines drop out of the tree BOOM BOOM BOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lucky they survived that, remembering that one mistake they could die. Then they hear something ROAR, ROAR, ROAR, three dragons appear, so you know what time it is; minigun time!! The fight took awhile but B.O.B got back on track when they finally arrived at the other side of the forest of doom there was just more water. However, there was a boat this time with an engine. Where do they go now? Do they go back to the bay or continue the mission?

           

The Night Quest

The night quest 

Ding! B.OB gets an email “meet at the lake Corona, no questions!” B.O.B hadn't seen each for more than 20+ years, the world had changed since they found the fossil when they were only ten. They hadn't talked to each other in all that time, yet they knew the mission. They knew they had to be careful, one mistake and they could all die. They jumped onto the raft, it was old and barely holding itself together. They pushed off the bank into the misty night. It was hard to see where they were going, visibility was low. Twenty minutes had passed when they started to hear weird noises (UDOUYIDFBF). B.O.B pulled out their mini guns ready to protect themselves, just then a huge blue dragon flew out from under the water. The trio start spraying their mini guns at the dragon's face. The mini guns destroyed the dragon and the body landed on the water which then flipped the boat over. Osheya flips the raft back over and they carry on with the journey to the forest of doom. 

To be continued.       

The fossil

Once upon a time there were three boys; Brodie,Osheya and Ben (B.O.B.) They were on a school trip and it was freezing outside. Everyone was in coats, they followed the guide to the fossil. Ben, Osheya and Brodie B.O.B decided to stay back. They saw three shovels, Osheya whispered “time to dig boys.” They start digging right next to the fossil. They found bone after bone, on and on for about six feet, then they started digging left and right finding other remains of the dinosaur that might be older than the first dinosaur that the guide showed them. Maybe triple the years! The first one was a million years old, so that's three million years old! This discovery was the best discovery in years. The people in town made a whole museum for just those two fossils. They thought that the first one was a t-rex and the other one was its father. This discovery earned $100k for the school, but B.O.B earned more, they made half a million dollars per person each.

The end.